So as I was walking alone, I tried to personify what's around me. To have company.
First the wind wisphered a question that was blunt, naked, unmasked. The wind wasn't alone, it dragged with it some sand. As it was quite an entrance from the wind, the night leaned in to listen. It had to lean in because it was a just a wispher. The imagery was that light was dim questions were soft, I was alone: trying to convey the peace that wasnt disturbed by noise.
Well it was something that occured to me in bizzare way. Kind of meant by barefoot, being blunt or raw or naked. Like a question not covered by any intention, a simple one. If you get what I mean lol
This was pretty epic! It feels like everyone was given a theme then it was put together like a puzzle? Anyhow it turned out very cool. I look forwared to more of these!
This chain is mesmerizing—each verse adds a layer of shadow, sound, and subtle tension. I’d love to participate in future rounds if you’re considering more contributors!
Bravo!!! Y'all did a fantastic job! This was really very good. Such a great idea, and so many different people. That's what I love the most, how so many of y'all made this beautiful poem together.
Nicely done everybody
🔥🔥❤️🔥 together we can!
Love the way it turned out 🖤
Love it!! Thank you for getting this posted! 🖤🖤🖤
You're welcome ❤️ thank you for participating ❤️🔥
Love it! Thank you🩷
Thank you for being part of this ❤️
To be honest I'm still wondering too 😂
No you must enlighten us. What were you thinking or feeling with your opening?
Okay I will try to explain the verses:
So as I was walking alone, I tried to personify what's around me. To have company.
First the wind wisphered a question that was blunt, naked, unmasked. The wind wasn't alone, it dragged with it some sand. As it was quite an entrance from the wind, the night leaned in to listen. It had to lean in because it was a just a wispher. The imagery was that light was dim questions were soft, I was alone: trying to convey the peace that wasnt disturbed by noise.
Hope that answers the question and clarify it 🙈
Beautiful
This is great! Thanks for putting this together. It was fun to be a part of.
You aren’t a downer, you are more an upper! You do so much uplifting of everyone in your circle!
Love it!
We need you next time to cast your voice, take the torch and pass it over ❤️🔥
Count me in for the next round if there is any! I’ll be glad to work alongside y’all! 🤎
I will make sure this ritual alive, it will be weekly inshallah 💙
Oh really? That’s perfect then!
❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
Wow this is incredible! So evocative. I'm still thinking about the "barefoot question."
This opening line was phenomenal. @The stranger set the bar so high. Even I looked it like , wow. What’s that mean.
Well it was something that occured to me in bizzare way. Kind of meant by barefoot, being blunt or raw or naked. Like a question not covered by any intention, a simple one. If you get what I mean lol
It's difficult to describe tbh😂
Thank you so much! 🖤
Thank you! Well the barefoot thing is Abit catchy not gonna lie, personifying the question as barefoot, being blunt or sth
Cool idea! I love these relays and conversations.
Will be honored to have you in this one, will be later today!
Nice! Tag me!
This was pretty epic! It feels like everyone was given a theme then it was put together like a puzzle? Anyhow it turned out very cool. I look forwared to more of these!
Thank you ,♥️
Yes voices blending together in harmony.
Looking forward to having you on these relays!
I'd be happy to be a part of something like this!
What a coincidence, just posted the note,
The second relay will start later (New Year Version) 🔥
Thank you so much... it was done relay style... so the first person wrote four lines then nominated the next for four lines and so on 🖤
Ah right! That makes sense
I saw HVR towards the end and i wont lie i held my breath and he didn’t disappoint! He took the torch and ran!
A lovely initiative! 🫶
HVR is a man of the people. Will never disappoint, even if it's not his style, he'll make the style his 💪🏾❤️🔥
Take it to another level and you did just that! :)
We should have one with you at the beginning… that’ll be interesting too :)
I want to encourage you to write more. I think your rap is poetry, I also think you have the emotional capacity to become a Byron if you chose.
🫣that sounded very “teacher” didn’t it lol 🤭
🩷good! Give it a go!
Glad you did! I know you have poet in you! It’s in your book! I even marked the pages…
You finished it off perfectly 🖤
This chain is mesmerizing—each verse adds a layer of shadow, sound, and subtle tension. I’d love to participate in future rounds if you’re considering more contributors!
Thank You
Of course you're considered everyone is. That's the idea of it, people forming chains, whether they know each other or not
Collaboration Poems are usually planned collaboration between two or more poets
The relay is about unplanned unlimited collaboration ❤️🔥
Thank you..
You're most welcome Dipti ♥️
Turned very very nice indeed💯
Yes absolutely ♥️🔥
Great idea
I'll make sure to tag you in the next one! 🖤✨
She already participated ♥️
Check the link at the end of the post!
Next time we'll make it more organized 🔥
Oh yeah! Don't know how I missed that!
Bravo!!! Y'all did a fantastic job! This was really very good. Such a great idea, and so many different people. That's what I love the most, how so many of y'all made this beautiful poem together.
Thank you ❤️
Thank you! 🖤
You never know how random things can turn out to be beautiful ❤️
Riiiight! 🖤🔥✨