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Wildwood Writer Spain's avatar

Your poem is a quiet plea for stillness, a search for a place where the soul can finally rest. It moves between oceans and mountains, darkness and light, longing and hope, trying to find a moment where simply existing is enough.

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Yes, from your words, I can tell how the poem touched you. Calmness and acceptance after being inspired and illuminated give your life the meaning you yearn for ❤️🙏🏾

Dipti  Vyas's avatar

This is a quiet awakening, the longing to simply be becomes a doorway. Sitting with open palms, feeling the light cross seas and mountains, you touch what Vedanta calls Brahman: infinite, unbounded awareness illuminating all without effort. Hope, resilience, and strength arise naturally here, not as things to earn, but as reflections of the self remembering it was never separate from the whole. Lying between earth and sky, wrapped in that gentle, pervasive light, you become both witness and cosmos, the eternal and the immediate intertwined.

The stranger's avatar

I love this description ❤️

Tell me more about Vedanta and Brahman please

And yes I agree they shouldn't be separated from the whole.

Thank you for your reflection Dipti ❤️‍🔥

Dipti  Vyas's avatar

Vedanta is less a philosophy and more a remembering. It says the light you were sensing isn’t coming to you, you are it. Brahman isn’t a distant god or concept; it’s the quiet, unbroken awareness in which seas, mountains, hope, and even longing appear and disappear. Nothing needs to be earned because nothing was ever missing.

When separation dissolves, strength and resilience stop being virtues we perform and become qualities that arise naturally, like warmth from fire. That space you described, between earth and sky, is Vedanta’s favorite meeting place: where the witness realizes it was never outside the world it was watching.

The stranger's avatar

Love this

Want to read more about these concepts as they clearly speak to me in a way.

Thank you so much for elaborating this 🙏🏾

Dipti  Vyas's avatar

Thank you. I am available anytime.

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You're welcome

Yes 🙌🏾

✨️NightLure✨️'s avatar

You poem is so basic, yet as vast as the night sky, as deep as the ocean, and as stalwart as the highest mountain top. Magnifique in every aspect, my brother! So profoundly beautiful! Much love.

✨️🤍✨️

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Thank you a lot dear

I always like to use basic words and concepts to transmit deep complicated emotions

I'm glad this touched something in you Sister ❤️

✨️NightLure✨️'s avatar

❤️