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Jasla💌's avatar

Omg this is literally a doppeeeee ❤‍🔥.

The birth of existence manifested

when meaning was finding its way into us:

no fixed definition, no order but that declared by us." I lovedss this oneee😭..

This was a gorgeous collaboration, how someone can create a masterpiece like this through normal conversation.... Beautifulll🥹🤍.

Echoes unmade's avatar

Omg. Thank you so much!

I’m so glad you liked it. 🔥✨

Jasla💌's avatar

🫂

the stranger's avatar

Thank you so much Jasla 🖤

This means a lot …

The magic of the moment can create this ✨🪄 I'm glad you enjoyed it ✨

Echoes unmade's avatar

🪄✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨

Jasla💌's avatar

Accept both of you, you're goddamnnn greatttt writersss😭🤍

Ethereal Twilight Poetry's avatar

Oh my god this is absolutely Gorgeous wow wow you guys created somethin beautiful!!! Very well done!

Echoes unmade's avatar

Thank you so much

It was an absolute plesure 🖤🔥✨

the stranger's avatar

Thank you so much Twilight 🖤🖤

This means a lot, truly. You're so kind 🫶🏾

And yes Echo’s verses and paintings are addictive ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

Honey 🍯 & Shadows 🌑's avatar

This was a beautiful collab. You both flow effortlessly together. I love cosmic love. My favorite line was where the sun was a candle being blown out and you said make a wish ! I could picture it in my mind !

Echoes unmade's avatar

Thank you soooo much!!

🖤🖤🖤🖤

the stranger's avatar

Thank you so much, Honey 🍯 🖤

I love cosmic love too ✨

Blowing the sun’s candle was something 🙈 I'm glad you could picture it ✨❤️‍🔥

Honey 🍯 & Shadows 🌑's avatar

You both are amazing 🤩 bravo 👏🏾

the stranger's avatar

You're the amazing one, truly 🖤

Thank you!

Sovereign Lady xxx 🩷's avatar

​"This is an absolute masterpiece, you two! 🌌🎨 The way your dual voices intertwine in this piece is pure magic—it truly feels like watching stars quietly become constellations. Lines like 'Her gaze; his compass.

His fire; her meaning' completely took my breath away, and the vivid, beautiful paintings bring the whole cosmic dance to life perfectly. A stunning alignment of raw talent and soul fire. Brilliant work! 🩷✍️✨"

Love ♥️ ❤️ 😍 you xxx

Echoes unmade's avatar

Omg thank you soooo much. 🥹🖤🔥

the stranger's avatar

This is so beautiful 😭🖤🖤 thank you so much. You don't how much this means to us 🙏🏾

I'm glad you can feel its cosmic nature ✨

Thank you so much 🖤✨

Maximilian J.T. Keller's avatar

Enjoy your Heaven...

Sovereign Lady xxx 🩷's avatar

Aww you are so welcome and rightfully deserved ❤️ 💖! I look forward to reading more of your masterpieces!

Love ♥️ ❤️ 😍 you xxx

the stranger's avatar

You're so kind and sweet ✨🖤

I look forward to reading yours as well ❤️‍🔥🔥

Sovereign Lady xxx 🩷's avatar

Aww you are so welcome 🙏 🤗!

Love ♥️ ❤️ 😍 you xxx

Yvonne's avatar

Outstanding!👏

Echoes unmade's avatar

Thank you so much. 🥹🖤

the stranger's avatar

Thank you 🖤 ✨

Phoenixica24's avatar

I love your writing! Everything evokes such beautiful imagery for me.

Echoes unmade's avatar

Thank you so much,

It was an absolute pleasure. 🖤🙏🏼✨

the stranger's avatar

Thank you so much 🖤🙏🏾

Yes, I love working with Echo on this one 🖤✨

Sincerely Seb's avatar

Really beautiful stuff. Love the space imagery, very creationist.

Echoes unmade's avatar

Thank you! 🙏🏼🖤✨

the stranger's avatar

Thank you so much, Seb ✨🖤

Sabrina Pelton's avatar

Deep

Echoes unmade's avatar

🖤🙏🏼✨

the stranger's avatar

🖤✨🙏🏾

Pelle Martens's avatar

There is a kind of love that makes people sound slightly insane when they try to describe it. This poem understands that 😊🤭 beautiful 🤍

the stranger's avatar

Love is insane

The poem tries to convey that ✨🪄

Thank you, 🖤 ✨

Echoes unmade's avatar

Ohh thank you so much! 🖤✨

Alicia's avatar

So ethereal, cosmic and lovely - wonderful creation, you two!!

Echoes unmade's avatar

Thank you so much 🖤

the stranger's avatar

Thank you so much for your kind words 🖤 ✨

Kim Williams, M.Div.'s avatar

Im dizzy…emotionally dizzied by this. Thank you. 🙏🏻

the stranger's avatar

Big words!

Thank you so much 🖤 ✨ this means a lot 🙏🏾

Echoes unmade's avatar

Ohh that’s so kind,

Thank you so much. ♥️✨

Human Threads's avatar

Fabulous collaboration 👌

Echoes unmade's avatar

Thank you!! 🪄✨

the stranger's avatar

Thank you so much ✨

Regolith's avatar

Ummmm … ok 🔥🔥🔥🔥 that was a sensational collab… this was such a stunning piece!

Wonderful writing from both of you. Absolute alchemy 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

the stranger's avatar

Thank you lovely sis 🖤🔥

This means a lot 🙏🏾🖤

Regolith's avatar

A complete and utter pleasure. 🖤

Echoes unmade's avatar

You’re too sweet ✨

the stranger's avatar

Echo, this is my lovely sister Regolith ✨🔥

Regolith, this is the lovely echo ✨🔥

Echoes unmade's avatar

Its an absolute plesure to meet you here. 🙏🏼✨✨✨

Regolith's avatar

I look forward to going through your writing. 🥰

Regolith's avatar

The feeling is mutual 💖🥰💖🥰

the stranger's avatar

Bless you 🖤 🙏🏾

Echoes unmade's avatar

Omg thank you so much.

🖤🙏🏼🔥

Regolith's avatar

Seriously stunning!

Gary L Taylor's avatar

This is truly stunning. Congratulations to the both of you on what you've produced, here.

the stranger's avatar

Thanks a lot Gary. We truly appreciate you🖤

And yes we are really happy with this poem 🙏🏾✨

Echoes unmade's avatar

Thank you so much!

That means a lot! 🙏🏼✨

imi's avatar

Wow… this was gorgeous. I'm absolutely mesmerised by the beauty of your words. Your voices and rhythm fits each other perfectly. Stunning collaboration,

the stranger's avatar

Thank you so much, Imi

We are glad you enjoyed it, and your description is beautiful 🖤

Echoes unmade's avatar

Thank you so much for your kind words, I’m glad you liked it.

🖤✨🙏🏼

Untamed Eulogy's avatar

Wow.!! This is absolutely breathtaking. You’ve managed to capture something that feels both infinitely vast and deeply, painfully intimate all at once.🔥✨❣️

the stranger's avatar

Ashuuu!! The queen of love 🖤 this means a lot coming from you ✨

I love how you described the poem.. thank you so much 🖤 ✨

Untamed Eulogy's avatar

Haha, "queen of love"! I'll take it 🖤 Honestly, you made it easy to write a good review because the poem was just that good. Always happy to read your stuff! 😊✨

Echoes unmade's avatar

Thank you for your lovely words

Really glad you liked it.

🖤🙏🏼✨♥️