This was like watching two lanterns recognize each other in the dark. There’s such tenderness in how these voices never try to claim or explain the moment only to notice it, to let it pass through and leave both souls lighter. The train becomes more than a setting... it’s a threshold, a moving in-between where strangers are allowed to be seen without being known. What I love most is the restraint. Nothing is forced. Nothing is resolved. And yet something real shifts for both of them, and for the reader too. There is a quiet kind of magic here. Thank you both for trusting it, and for sharing the space where your words met. 🖤🖤🖤
Starlit souls what a beautiful description😍 The intimacy of this moment, the way kindered souls recognise eachother feels like the world stopped just for them to reach for their deepest points of being. You two wrote this poem musically enchanting with words and lines that weave and intertwine so delicately. What a shimmering ethereal bond you two sowcased here. I applaud you for this incredibly brilliant piece💗💌
Two strangers, one train, zero small talk and somehow the universe still delivered a soul upgrade. I’m taking notes. I love how the poetry lets the quiet sparks fly without anyone else noticing, like cosmic speed dating, but with actual feelings and zero small talk. The world moves on, but these shadows just upgraded their internal Wi-Fi.
Blend of two writers... just winning the ground... @regolithsramblings @thestrangerwrites 💛💛Both of you've created an insanely stunning piece.. How everything is on it's own pace, not racing anywhere.. Awesome Brilliant writers💛💛💛
The journey of you two on the train is a metaphor for self-discovery and the healing power of human connection. The way your words and eyes find each other amidst the noise is both poignant and inspiring. A masterpiece of emotional depth♥️🙏🏼
I really enjoyed this! I love the idea of strangers passing in the night yet holding a moment so deeply.
Thank you Andrea 💙 it means the world to us recieving such a beautiful praise ♥️
Thank you Andrea. Thank you for reading. Two passing souls that just needed a little light to borrow 🫶🏽
This was like watching two lanterns recognize each other in the dark. There’s such tenderness in how these voices never try to claim or explain the moment only to notice it, to let it pass through and leave both souls lighter. The train becomes more than a setting... it’s a threshold, a moving in-between where strangers are allowed to be seen without being known. What I love most is the restraint. Nothing is forced. Nothing is resolved. And yet something real shifts for both of them, and for the reader too. There is a quiet kind of magic here. Thank you both for trusting it, and for sharing the space where your words met. 🖤🖤🖤
Thank you Laura 🖤
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Thank you for deeply understanding this. The language of the eyes and soul spoke here, conveying what words can't utter.
Appreciate your words, Laura. Truly, we do!
It was an honor to read 🖤✨
Thanks Laura! I have to thank my brother from another mother aka Stranger! He was on point!!! 🫶🏽 and so organised!!
Amazing! This will linger, I can feel it!
Thanks Franky 🖤
Thank you Franky ❤️❤️
Starlit souls what a beautiful description😍 The intimacy of this moment, the way kindered souls recognise eachother feels like the world stopped just for them to reach for their deepest points of being. You two wrote this poem musically enchanting with words and lines that weave and intertwine so delicately. What a shimmering ethereal bond you two sowcased here. I applaud you for this incredibly brilliant piece💗💌
Thanks for reading Una. It’s an honour to receive such praise from you 😩🥰
You both showcased beauty through your words✨
Thank you dear ♥️
Regolith is the master of unspoken words 💙
You captured the scene beautifully. Thank you for sitting with these words, and appreciate your kind praise. Cant thank you enough <3
Don’t thank me, art should be praised💗
As do beautiful words 💙
Beautiful poems ✨️ ♥️
Amit thank you so so much!
Your welcome ✨️
Thank you Amit ♥️
Two strangers, one train, zero small talk and somehow the universe still delivered a soul upgrade. I’m taking notes. I love how the poetry lets the quiet sparks fly without anyone else noticing, like cosmic speed dating, but with actual feelings and zero small talk. The world moves on, but these shadows just upgraded their internal Wi-Fi.
Yes some supernatural stuff haha
Thank you for your comment 😁
cosmic speed dating.. I love this 😂 thank you so much for reading! I think we all need a little upgrade now and then! WiFi signal is crap here haha
Cosmic speed dating with dial-up internet energy. An upgrade feels overdue.
You should check out my next short story. It's about a cosmic war between the sun and the moon 🌙 🌝
I would love it! I will definitely check it out.
My dearest Dipti.
Always a great supporter of my humble poems
Btw, your dedication poem is cooking 👨🏾🍳
Supporting humble poems is clearly my calling. I’ll patiently await the tasting menu.
Blend of two writers... just winning the ground... @regolithsramblings @thestrangerwrites 💛💛Both of you've created an insanely stunning piece.. How everything is on it's own pace, not racing anywhere.. Awesome Brilliant writers💛💛💛
Pm! Thank you sooo much! 🖤
My pleasure🩵🩵🩵
Thank you alot Pm , we really appreciate you ❤️🔥❤️🔥
My pleasure🩵🩵🩵
Gorgeously evocative
Thank you so much ☺️
🖤🖤🖤
Hold on my favourite poets did a collab and I didn’t get the memo?! LOVE IT! 🤎
That is really something special coming from you…😩 with the talent in multiple languages! 😩❤️🥰
I love yall in all my languages 🫶🏼✨
We love you too in all the languages and tongues we had twisted to survive this world
Love and respect Asma
I need this printed in my heart for real
You've taken a piece of our heart already 😭♥️
Stoppp 😩😥😭😭😭😭😭😭
I won’t stop tho hihi 🤭
Awwwh ♥️ there you go then
Thank you ❤️🔥
Spread the word so others won't miss the beautiful imagination of my sis @regolith 😉
You are epic. It was a pleasure.
Too late in the day for me to be sobbing.. 😩
we’ll cry happy tears together
Deal!
This is one of the best collaborations I’ve read here so far. Absolutely stunning and hauntingly beautiful.
Appreciate your words Imi 💙 thank you for your support and your kind words 🙏🏾
The pleasure is all mine! 💙
Imi I can’t begin to express my gratitude! ❤️🖤❤️🖤
oh let's go!!
how intimate well done well done well done
Thanks! 🥰
Thank youuu ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
Wonderful collaboration. Beautiful!
Thanks Becky!! 🖤❤️
Thank you Becky ♥️
Beautiful collab result:)
🫶🏽 thank you
Thank you alot ♥️♥️
Great collaborative effort from two spectacular talents
Thank you, such a praise coming from an extraordinary person like you ,❤️🔥
You're welcome
🖤 thank you
You're welcome
The journey of you two on the train is a metaphor for self-discovery and the healing power of human connection. The way your words and eyes find each other amidst the noise is both poignant and inspiring. A masterpiece of emotional depth♥️🙏🏼
Exactly. Self discovery through human connection. I love how you described this!
Eyes have language, that’s what we tried to convey; we dont need to talk to feel empathy and connection.
Are you familiar with the arabic verse:
فتكلمت لغة العيون ** فخاطبت عيناك في بحر الهوى عيناي
It roughly translates to “ And the language of eyes spoke, there your eyes talked to mine in the sea of love and empathy” My translation sucks haha.
Thank you so much for your kind words. I am really glad you enjoyed it :)
@Regolith is the master of emotional depth, proud to have her as a sister <3
This is beautiful work!
Thank you!